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Crafting Female Characters

3/7/2020

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In the excellent writer’s craft book, The Art of Character, by author David Corbett he writes, ‘describing your character kills her.’ I agree. Descriptions can suck the joy out of a reader’s experience, and reveal a writer’s limited imagination.
When describing female characters in particular, try to avoid a laundry list type of description; blonde, blue-eyed, long-legged, busty…Instead, or in addition, give some insight into who she actually is, her soul, heart, or essence.
Avoid the stereotypes. For example, “she’s attractive even without the makeup” or “stunning despite her age” or worse, “was good-looking 10 years ago” or any other worn-out, exhausted, condescending, and overused physical descriptor. If there is something about her presence that is significant to the story, or that makes her unique, then yes, please share, otherwise give your readers the gift of using their imagination.
When describing your characters consider their essence;
Sasha’s hair was as red hot as her temper. Tie the descriptor to a character attribute (temper).
Gabby’s eyes were emerald fire. That gives us an insight into her soul (passion, sexuality, enthusiasm, etc.).
Kendra’s hair was palm-oil slick, her skin celestial black, she moved across the room like a Nubian queen. This gives us insight as to color of character, attitude, and beauty.
All of those above examples create images in the reader’s imaginative mind.
When writing your character descriptions be creative, use metaphor or simile. Consider combining physical descriptors with movements and gestures, or using your characters action to reveal who they are. Be creative; give insights and essence statements so your readers can enjoy the journey of character discovery. 

Post by author, writing instructor, and EPIC board Member, Mindy Halleck 


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Susan Frederick
3/19/2020 02:27:05 pm

Mindy Halleck has written a terrific blog addressing the issues around Crafting Female Characters. I've been guilty of using some of the typical stereotypes that Mindy addresses, so I found the post to be especially helpful. Thanks, Mindy!

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Judith Works
5/4/2020 10:13:45 am

Ah, those females!
I'm struggling with one right now, or she's struggling with me to become a real character on the page.

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Gerhard Gehrke
5/8/2020 03:56:02 pm

Solid and practical advice. Thanks!

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10/15/2020 08:15:44 am

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